Hi this is my first upload onto my first blog site.
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About Me
- Meg Garven
- Sydney, NSW, Australia
- Hi, I'm continuing a Digital Media course at TAFE to update existing skills and learn new ones. This is my second blog
3 comments:
nice presentation!
however, there could be possibly a few changes.
Page 1: the photo is nice and creative, but i found the heading a little hard to read. perhaps you could position and scale the heading into the screen of the computer!
Page 2: the photo suits this page well because of your interests and i the text going down the page is pretty creative! the only suggestion i could make, is position the background image down the page a bit, so that the test at the top isn’t as bunched up. some editing in Photoshop could help to extend the sky, if there isn’t sufficient sky left on the image.
Page 3: nice quote, its very true! possibly the background image could be slightly opaque, so that the view isn’t drawn to image as much as the quote.
Over All: the text through out the whole presentation could be the same, to keep it all consistent. nice work though!
I agree the heading in the first page is a bit hard to read.
The next page perhaps the text could be repositioned slightly but the placement of it is great.
The third page no suggestion to what has already been said.
slide 1 Heading is hard to read
slide 2 the writing should be moved
slide 3 is a bit faded needs a bit of colour not too much or it will take the focus more than the writing
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